Pitch Feedback

My Pitch

Pitch presentation

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To advertise my idea for my music video, I sold it through a pitch and asked for feedback from my peers. This was the feedback I gained:

What I have considered...

The feedback I would like to incorporate into my video would be the idea of the star image motif being on the iPod. This would be unique and also create a central idea from the very beginning. I am also considering a variety of locations instead of the protagonist chasing the girl through a party scene.

I explained in my pitch that there is a chance of lighting issues, and so if the lighting is not good at the time of shooting, then I can adjust the brightness on iMovie (the editing software). If not, I can hold a torch or place a lamp to add extra light.